My Poem About Molly

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  1. Chloe and Buddy Experienced Member

    I just wrote this, and I love it. This is about molly and her journey here and her time here. I wanted to share it with you guys. Hope you like it!

    I am surrounded by love
    They dont push and shove
    My elder body has become
    Surrounded in arms of some
    People that love me so
    And i do now know
    That i will never be alone
    As i had been oh not so long ago
    The tall girl will not let me go
    The tall man i know loves me so
    The small one loves my kisses on her face
    And me and Buddy are ready to race
    Through our wonderland
    Tall we stand
    We run this land
    Tail and tail
    He never fails
    To put up with me
    Who secretly he does love
    My small body
    Running through the green
    I forget myself
    I know it seems obsene
    But i never had it
    I had little
    But day by day, i know it would change
    Some day, some day
    And it did
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  2. Dogster Honored Member

    Beautiful poem!!!!:love::love:
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  3. jackienmutts Honored Member

    Just beautiful! :love:
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  4. MaryK Honored Member

    Absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!!:love:
  5. Chloe and Buddy Experienced Member

    thanks! i am gonna make one about buddy next. lemme get started on that now!
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  6. MaryK Honored Member

    Can't wait to read it:D:love:
  7. Chloe and Buddy Experienced Member

    Here it is! This one is shorter, and it doesn't rhyme as much

    Pushed and shoved
    I had once been
    Such a small pup
    Some I’d seen commit sin.
    Some time ago
    They’d came to see
    And pick out one that would be
    Their adopted son, her baby brother
    Even though I was not human
    I could see her true self
    The little one, so young and free
    I knew that I would want to be
    Her pal, by her side
    ‘til the end of time
    Tall we stand
    We run this land
    Paw in hand
    Together, forever
    She knew it to, she wouldn’t look elsewhere
    She said “I don’t care, I want him”
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  8. Dogster Honored Member

    Love it!!!!:love:
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